RE: "SC-S32/W4-"Today's Writing, Tomorrow's Memories."—The Nature Diary.
Here is my moderation guide...
Hello , reading through post I can see alot of nature you have explored .You made mentioned you are a lover of nature and have turned house and environment to green house .I can see beautiful green plants in the house and the surrounding of the house . Why the municipal city dwellers leave the environment full of dirt so nasty and dirty .It really makes the natural not to beautiful .I can see you and your daughter are lovers of mango icream .Happy you guys enjoyed it well.
My observation is that you did input the date of your nature diary which is one of the rules of the challenge .How can you write a nature diary without date .It makes it difficult for us to evaluate your content as we have limited date given for the challenge.
Also, you got a good nature diary but I was expecting after, exploring all these nature on your post to tell your own personal impressions about these nature .Its be it important,negative or positive impact of nature to us humanbeing .All these makes your work beautiful.
. We have assessed your assignment post , below captures our assessments.
| Criteria | Remark |
|---|---|
| Real user | ✔️ |
| #steemexclusive | ✔️ |
| Free of Plagiarism | ✔️ |
| AI Article | (Human text!) |
| Bot free | ✔️ |
Comment/Recommendation
- The beauty of diary writing: 4.7marks
- Following the rules: 1.5marks
- Markdown Usage: 1 mark
- Comments: 1 Mark
Scores| 8.2/10
@wirngo . I was assuming to get grading 9.5 by flowing the rules carefully.. It's all yesterday activities. I especially captured the photos for this challenge.
I love the word you are using assuming friend , you didn’t include your date of your nature diary in normal circumstances if I wanted to be hard on you I won’t review your post,because we stated the date limit as one of the rule .secondly you limited your self by sharing your personal view on the nature explore .You could have post or negative impression about the naure to share with us to make your writing more interesting . It’s nit all about capturing nature but give us it the importance that r values of those things .You focused your nature diary but on the things you captured .The mark presentation on 6 carries a lot of things for to require to capture all the presentation mark. I graded you base on what you deserved.At times focused reading on the comments review I made your post to see which part you failed to capture all your marks . You didn’t even share a selfie of your self as the rule of the contest stated , don’t do things by assumption.
Have a nice day !
@wirngo , We are Muslims and my husband not allowed me to share my own photos here. That's why i didn't share selfie. Well thank you for you review and grading.