Dear @mr-peng, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.65/5 | Good |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.75/3 | Satisfactory |
| Presentation | 0.9/1 | Good |
| My observation | 0.9/1 | You leaned more on psychology and symbolism than on actual action or dialogue. |
| Total | 9.2/10 |
Feedback
- If I had to sum it up: I loved the way you captured the human conflict and that was the strongest part of your story. What I missed was a bit more dialogue-driven interaction with Tina and a definitive ending.