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RE: SC-S29/W2- Nostalgia Of The Liitle Me : My School Days

Greetings,

Thank you so much for participating in the contest.

Receiving a math problem to solve from the teacher on the very first day of school, and then being punished by the teacher, was truly a difficult experience. It is the kind of incident that stays in one’s memory for a lifetime.

When you attend a school with a large number of students, there is naturally a wide mix of languages and cultures. For a young child from a well-mannered family, adjusting to such an environment can be quite challenging at first. However, you adapted to it remarkably well.

Finding friends at school who stood by you and helped protect you from bullying is truly a matter of good fortune. You honestly admitted the mistakes you made during your school life and learned to value your own choices, which helped you become more sincere and grounded in life.

In my opinion, it would have been better to add the source of the image, even though it is copyright-free.

SectionDescriptionPoints
Plagiarism & AI FreeOriginal storytelling from childhood2
Original PhotographyPersonal photos or recreated moments, photo caption0
Markdown & PresentationNeat format, readable, visually appealing2
Memory DescriptionEmotions, details, and clarity of childhood2
Life Lesson / ValueReflection on what the memory taught you1.8
Total7.8 Points