Greetings,

Thank you so much for participating in the contest.

Where many people take school or university life lightly, I find it positive that the author has started writing from a place of gratitude.

The first day at university, arriving early, not finding a department, getting lost while buying lunch, these incidents are directly related to the lives of many students.

Your story of becoming independent is beautifully portrayed. Cooking yourself, shopping, eating alone, these small things reveal a mentality of adapting to many things. The description of overcoming the fear of eating alone is particularly touching.

The friend you mentioned played a responsible role like a guardian. The author has highlighted the importance of friendship and discipline through real events without increasing emotions, which has increased credibility.

Giving a coursemate a place in the house, sharing food, and gradually violating that boundary, this experience teaches a difficult but important lesson in life. You have presented the incident directly and bravely, which I liked.

You have talked about your current position and values. Having few friends, maintaining respect, helping as needed, these decisions come from real life lessons, which are lessons we should take from school life. All in all, she has written quite well.