RE: SC-S29/W2- Nostalgia Of The Liitle Me : My School Days
Greetings,
Thank you so much for participating in the contest.
While reading your article, I felt like you didn't just write about school, but went back to your own childhood and highlighted the moment of going to a rural primary school on the first day holding your father's hand, which touched my heart. The excitement of the new school uniform, trying to make friends in an unfamiliar environment, these are like the golden chapters of school life.
Entering school is a familiar moment with a mixed feeling of fear and excitement. Even if you are asked to sit in the front, the fear of being beaten is a familiar feeling in almost everyone's school life. The excitement of the first hour of class and the memories of playing with friends are also great.
You have connected the school gate, the pictures painted on the walls, the field, the sitting area with everything. In this, the reader is not only reading, but also imagining the scenes before his eyes.
The words of the math teacher and the incident of taking the exam with your own knowledge without copying carry a very beautiful moral lesson. You have conveyed the message of honesty and hard work as the real power in simple words, which is commendable.
You have compared the dream of school life with the present life very well. The beautiful aspect of your post is the transformation from small dreams to big responsibilities.
| Section | Description | Points |
|---|---|---|
| Plagiarism & AI Free | Original storytelling from childhood | 2 |
| Original Photography | Personal photos or recreated moments, photo caption | 1.7 |
| Markdown & Presentation | Neat format, readable, visually appealing | 1.8 |
| Memory Description | Emotions, details, and clarity of childhood | 2 |
| Life Lesson / Value | Reflection on what the memory taught you | 2 |
| Total | 9.5 Points |