Steemit open mic week 44... Rains of fire (original song)
Hello my steem friends and fellow musicians.
The world today is full of war and terror every where. I wrote this song for all the people affected by the strife and death all around. We need this world to change into a better place.
This is my entry for openmic week 44
Thank you @luzcypher and @pfunk for this amazing platform.
Steemit Open Mic
Lyrics :
It all was a sign
Roll of the tide
The wasted pride
And the realms of fire
More the reason
Walk all the way
I saw the light
And the rains of fire
I was hidden and cold in the dark
When they killed them all
I cry and cry for them to stop
Don't hear my call
They don't hear my call...
Please stop the killing
Please stop the fight
Where ever I go
There are rains of fire
Children dying
Mothers are crying
Please stop this pain
And the rains of fire
We see the little ones cry
All the time
Walk on the empty road
Crying for all that's gone
Nice!! good to see you participating regularly. Wish you good luck.Cheers!!!!!
Thank you for the support @tamsguitar.
Cheers !!!
Amazing Atul !! specially the fire effect in the background.
Thank you @sukhpreetsingh for listening and appreciating.
Peace !!!
No problem mate you can check out my recent blog. Its a cover by poets of fall . :)
Hauntingly poignant my friend! I believe that the whole of humanity “gets-it” – however, those pulling the strings in the elite seats of power, well… therein lays the cancer we collectively need to banish from the face of the Earth. I’m hoping I will be witness to this within my lifetime however, I’m quite fearful I have equal chance of witnessing the end of-the-world as we once knew it instead… We gotta keep sing the songs though - and getting the message through win, lose, or draw... Great Song!
Yes I too want to witness the end of this evil cancer but like you fear the end very soon. Thank you for listening and giving your thoughts on the subject.
Peace and love !!!
That's a great song my friend.
Even if we don't manage to change the world, it becomes a slightly more bearable place with a reflective song such as yours to listen to.
Thank you for listening to the song and for your words. Yes i think the world has a long way to go to become a better place. And words and music are like the start of a butterfly ripple effect. They may go a long way.
Peace and love !!!
Baaa! <3
You've done it again my friend, such passion, haunting vocals, powerful lyrics. You are one of a kind, and I always enjoy hearing you play the Open Mic. Thank you for being a voice for the voiceless here!!
Thank you for your beautiful words and support lyndsay. You are very kind. I really feel that we have to do something for all the downtrodden and helpless people in the world. Maybe our voices will help.
Peace and love !!!
Yes, our voices do help, because it lets others know that it's okay to care. So much of the world, the media...it tries to make society superficial, to not care about anything is what they try to make cool.
When many voices rise together, it will make Caring the cool thing to do. And when enough people begin to care, begin to feel empathy, and even anger at the crimes being committed on the innocent, action will be taken.
you did a great job my friend I love people who look for the truth and they share the truth with other people , really nice lyrics and you did a great performance :) , Imagine all the people , Living life in peace ...
Thank you David for appreciating my words and music. Yes the world would be a much better place if all live in peace. But I don't really see that happening around. All I see is an evil cancer of hatred and a will to destroy and rule by the powers to be. I see brain washed herds led by evil fanatics looking for self acclaim and power. I hope people listen to words of our appeal.
Peace !!!
Very cool sound. A bit eerie and also very powerful. Rock on!
Thank you sally for listening and appreciating.
Peace and love!!!
Thanks for sharing such good music... can't stop listening to it again n again... n the lyrics r just too gud... wat a chrismatic way to wake this world up.... kudos man... keep sharing such good music n thoughts😍😍😍😍
Thank you for your kind words. I am happy tthat you like the music.
Peace and love !!!
Thought provoking song. Thank you for playing for us.
Up early Luzcypher. Yes we really have to try and make the world better in any way we can. Songs do that for me. Thank you for this amazing platform to spread the music and words.
Peace and love !!!