STEEMIT OPEN MIC WEEK 70: Original Spoken Word

breshepard (59)in #openmic • 8 years ago

Here is something I wrote and wanted to share with you all, since I can't sing it is being presented as my original spoken word. This is my first one ever so have mercy on me. I hope you like it (while I am secretly embarrassingly dying inside because I hate myself on video! lol)

In true sense of the message of this post- be kind!

Xo

#original #poetry #spoken #word

8 years ago in #openmic by breshepard (59)

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unlockrs (54) 8 years ago

Incredible. True words.

breshepard (59) 8 years ago

Thank you brother 😊

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teamturnerlive (50) 8 years ago

I think you did a great job - one take! Thank you for sharing your other talent with us.

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breshepard (59) 8 years ago

Thank you!! I was really nervous to post it lol

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evoman1 (61) 8 years ago

A welcome change to average open mic entries. Nice writing!

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breshepard (59) 8 years ago

😊

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ahlawat (77) 8 years ago

Excellent working

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breshepard (59) 8 years ago

Thank you!

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operahoser (51) 8 years ago

I think you can sing and you just don't want to. Tell me you don't sing in your car!

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breshepard (59) 8 years ago

Ha! Ok but car and shower don’t count!

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operahoser (51) 8 years ago

How about your spoken delivery over a beat?

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luzcypher (74) 8 years ago

Great words

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breshepard (59) 8 years ago

Thank you very much!

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