Steemit Open Mic Week 93 - Connecting The Dots - Original song by Darren Claxton

in #openmic • 6 years ago (edited)

Here's a new song for this weeks Open Mic contest sponsored by @luzcypher & @pfunk

Lyrics:

I came back today
then drifted away
can't hide in that place
cos it shows on my face

Some kindness remains
and it fits just in case
respected the race
and I feared your embrace

It was sent by a smile
that I'd never seen
never seen before
connecting the dots
to a picture placed
inside your heart

to count but divide
divide to rely
on words we never say
to the tears they wash away

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     6 years ago 

    This is perfect Darren, really enjoyable, I heard it on radio :D awsome performance!! and a beautiful song!

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     6 years ago 

    Your story on sma radio about how you wrote this one, I really relate too. I do that a lot too. Great song, great lyrics!

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     6 years ago 

    wow,one of the best lyrics...awesome.

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     6 years ago 

    Thanks for the compliment and for listening to my new track!

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       6 years ago 

      Dear Artzonian, thanks for using the #ArtzOne hashtag. Your work is valuable to the @ArtzOne community. Quote of the week: Art, freedom and creativity will change society faster than politics. -Victor Pinchuk

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         6 years ago 

        What can I tell you? I love the theme, it fascinates me how you sing, the theme is beautiful, in short you are a tremendous artist and it would be really an honor to touch you, I hope and that happens soon, I know that it will be so

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           6 years ago 

          You're a very kind person! Your words and support for me and my music are truly appreciated!

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             6 years ago 

            Hi Darren... great job man. A hug from Venezuela my friend.

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               6 years ago 

              Hey! Thanks for the support my friend!

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                 6 years ago 

                And another great song... and poem
                Great to listen to it live earlier on
                Good luck, Darren

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                   6 years ago 

                  Dude - as if this week were not already chock full of incredible talent - here you come with "Connecting the Dots." I'm gonna get even with you one of these days... Ha-ha... ;-)

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                     6 years ago 

                    Hey man! 😂 Thought I'd have a few weeks rest!
                    Cheers for the love mate!

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