Open mic songwriters challenge week #1 - Broken mirror
Hello Steemit community!
This is my entry for the Open mic songwriters challenge week #1, the theme was "broken mirror"
I honestly didn't think I could write a song in such a short period of time, but I decided to challenge myself
and thought this was great motivation to do it!!
Here are the lyrics:
-Stay-
Comes again, this stone
drifts away my soul
and when I find
myself again
my hands are numb
cunningly, it hides
right behind my eyes
and then the lights
they start to fade
and then I fight
so I can
Stay
I found a way to see it clearer
Stay
I've seen behind this broken mirror
and then the lights
they start to fade
And then I fight to
Stay
I found a way to see it clearer
Stay
I've seen behind this broken mirror
I also have to thank @luzcypher and @meno for this awesome contest!!!!
I'm really pumped to hear other people's entries and to see what comes out of me!!!
Happy monday!!!
brilliant! You have a great voice and the lyrics are really interesting. Some of those notes that your playing with in your vocals are really nice
Hello!, thank you, I'm glad you like it! :)
Dude, man... this is an awesome entry! Nice!
Hey!!!
thank you very much!!! are you entering as well?
Firstly, I don't have the artistry nor skill to compete with all of you brilliant artists. Secondly, since I'm an official "judge" - I cannot qualify to enter - even if I were so inclined... The most I'll do is post an "unofficial" non-entry song just to keep whatever chops I have left in good form... Ha! :-)
Haha!! No need to compete, just doing what you can and actually enjoying it is already a lot!!! Looking forward to your "unofficial" song!! :)
You got that right, bro! Seems like you and I are on the same wavelength, man! ... Thanks!
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Thanks for entering
Hello!, thanks for hosting! :)
Excelente lucho!!! voy a tener ese coro en la cabeza el resto del dia... excelente!
Jajaja me salio bien ese hook entonces! :D gracias!!!
You did amazing! did you know the judges picked you as one of the favorites!?? you so deserve it man! your song is really good! i am upvoting you!
Hello!!!!
Thank you very much!!!
I didn't know, I saw your comment just now, do you know which judge picked me?
Thanks for your upvote!!!
I`ll be uploading my next entry latter today
I hope you like it!
:)
You were pretty much in all of their lists.. the one i recall is from @passion-ground .. here it is ;) https://steemit.com/openmic/@passion-ground/official-open-mic-songwriters-challenge-passion-ground-s-top-5-entries-for-week-1
forgot to mention, i loved your voice!