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RE: Steemit Open Mic Week 97 - (original song) - Things As They Ought To Be

in #openmic • 6 years ago (edited)

Hi johnthefelon.
I love the art of misc.
But this time am having a pain with the lyrics.
It sounds a push away.
This part should be turned to am worthy.
"And don't you know, I am not worthy."
And a few parts would follow the direction.
Good luck in the contest.

6 years ago in #openmic by
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     6 years ago 

    Thank you for the feedback. In the song, the narrator is trying to get out of a relationship, but the other person is hanging on. They live apart, and she keeps sending him things to keep him in her life ("manufactured memories"), and he is saying "I am not worthy," as in, she should share these precious things with someone who will appreciate her love. The song is gender-neutral and could easily be a woman singing to a man.

    Glad you liked it. I followed you.