Steemit Openmic Week 72 - Promise (Original)

in #opennmic6 years ago (edited)

This song was a promise I made to myself.
I'm my own music magic therapist.

I'm gonna find myself again
I will define the line to stop you
right before my skin
right before my skin
right before my skin

This morning shadow it will pass
when I embrace the thought of knowing
There's nothing that will last
nothing's gonna last
nothing's gonna last

I will be fine
I will be fine
I notice the signs
so I can be

I will be fine
I will be fine
I'll know when it's time
so I can be

What you just opened is alive
and it is not on me to kill it
if it can survive
when I treasure it inside
treasure it inside
treasure it inside

And when the emptiness returns
I will greet it with the scars that I have earned
from the lessons that I've learned
the lessons I have learned

When I realize I'm suffering
for something lost so easily
there will be no point in suffering anymore

But just now is not the time
it's a war of heart and mind
and I don't know even
what they're fighting for

I will be fine
I will be fine
I notice the signs
so I can be

I will be fine
I will be fine
I'll know when it's time
so I can be

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Absolutely beautiful, loved every second of this.

Thanks for sharing emo-files again meno! <3

another beautiful song. That first verse in particular is killer......

thanks basil! It's nice that we share the same pool of magic.

This is marvelous! I was so glad they featured your wonderful performance a while ago in MSP-Waves Radio! You have a lovely voice! 😊

Your voice lady! Beautiful!! Wow <3 Great song and love the blue space it put me in @melavie

Thank you! I'm happy we shared some feeling there. <3

Love your voice and it's a heartfelt original!
Nice to meet you and your heart!
Blessings

Thanks a lot! I also absolutely love your entry! Our hearts met twice.

See, this is why I am loving Steemit and Open Mic - connection with beautiful souls like you! 💚🌟🙏🏽

Another amazing piece! Hope you'll really be fine :) Keep up the great voice!

Yes I am. That song is about half a year old. It has worked it's magic in the meantime. :)
Thanks for listening!

Sounds great, nice lyrics and tune, voice is very strong

Happy you like my song. Thanks for stopping by.

What an amazing voice! Beautiful.

Thanks. :)

hi, i'm a korean pianist & singersongwriter. i love your voice! beautiful. nice to meet you!

Thank you for listening!

That was beautiful @melavie, amazing job!

Thanks a lot!

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