El Balcón - Original song // Steem pre-release!

in #palnet5 years ago

Hello everyone!

I've been a little out I know but i am somewhat around still , today I just wanted to share some of the things I've been working on . I'm releasing some music soon on all platforms but I wanted to make a little pre-release , yes .. you heard it here first :P .

This song is called El Balcón and was inspired on an Open Mic week and the song just stuck around and made it to what is going to be my first release of original music . This is it :

El Balcón
(P.Mena)
Calló su voz
Cayó su sol
Perdió color
en el silencio

Su corazón
se marchitó
En el calor
de su miedo

Su balcón
se cerró
la escondió
en su pena

Y Aun
Se duerme sola
La luz
cuenta sus horas
Aun
despierta sola
La lluvia en enero
se pasa mas lento
''ya pasará''

Here is a translation:

The Balcony
(P.Mena)

Her voice stopped
Her sun fell
She lost her color
in the silence

Her heart
withered down
In the heat
of her fears

Her balcony
has closed
it hid her
in her grief

And Still
She sleeps alone
The light
counts her hours
And still
She wakes up alone
Rain in January
goes away slower
''this too shall pass''

Drums: Julian Piterman
Bass and Keys: Pablo Elorza
Mixed by: Sergio Vivar

Thanks for Listening!

Pechiche Mena

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mr pechi sir soundcloud not showing me your song. i already know it but i would love to hear it again... its one of my favorites...

Hey Tori , does this work ?? Thanky very much for the visit .. much hugs :)

https://soundcloud.com/jose-mena-935162143/el-balcon-single-version

no. it is saying to me that the url is invalid. i tried searching soundcloud and while i can find other songs from you, i cant find that song.

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