Ahaha the simple life, we will never get to have these innocent types of confusions happen any more 😅
Decent writing job my friend, gotta start somewhere and this is a pretty decent length story!
My only suggestion would be about grammar and spelling, double and triple check 😅
Overall you can write!
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thank you sir, I will. What a wonderful comment. Truly appreciated it, thanks for giving time in reading it. Salute sir
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No problem buddy, takes time and practice to get really good like anything else in life just keep at it!
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