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in #ph8 years ago (edited)

There was a girl named Becca and a boy named Joe. Becca was in a burning house. None of the firefighters could get in the house because the fire was too big. Joe dressed in one of the fire suits and got into the house. When he got up the stairs, the steps fell off behind him. When he got into her room he sealed the door up behind him. He held her tight, kissed her, huged her, then said that he loved her. She asked what was wrong, and he said that he was going to die. Her eyes widened as she began to cry. He picked her up and jumped out of the four story house. He landed on his back with her on top of him. He died to save her life.

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Beautiful story. The things we do for love and out loved ones are out of this world. This reminds me of a line in 'When I'm Gone' by Eminem: 'Have you ever loved someone so much you'd give an arm for? Not the expression. No! Literally give an arm for.' So powerful.

Thank you so much for sharing this. :)

I really hope it's not true.
Titanic again?
No way!

Nice, you did well to keep it short and to the point. Makes it more effective.

btw, your tag, ph, what is it? I see all kinds of posts there.

Lovely story

Oh my goodness, a heartwarming story of love with a sad ending! Great job making a short story!

Thanks a lot !!

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Mm really thanks !