Beautiful story @handofzara, that takes me back to my childhood and my first pirate's book that I read "treasure Island" by Robert Loius Stevenson. I also dreamed to be a part of treasure searching team and of course to find the treasure. You reflected the emotions of Jack very well, his thoughts, hesitations and change of his emotions once he recalled Kate's words. The way how you describe is really easy and intriguing to read. Classical adventure structure, really enjoyed it,

Cheers from Art supporting blog @art-venture