Hi Ashley, you asked me for some guidance in another post, so I'm going to give it here.

Ok, post not bad. Great pictures, but are they of you? Show yourself in them if they are, because we cant tell if they're just promo pics nicked off a website. And label them maybe.

Use headers more....Hit us in the first line with a H1 tagged bit of info...

something like

I SPEND THE DAY TEST DRIVING COOL NEW VR TECH IN A CRAZY FUTURISTIC ENVIRONMENT

Also, split your sentences up a bit....Maybe use more tags to seperate, and perhaps centre your list of pros and cons using the <#CENTER#> code (remove the #'s to make it work)

I'd definately take out the advert at the end. You're not here to sell, you're here to share your experiences.

Dont ask for follows. Dont ask for upvotes, resteems or anything. Id probably have changed your tags and order to VR playstation games review technology.

Nootropics...what is that ? It's never going to be a big tag, so don't waste it. Neither is playstation a big tag I don't think. Your first tag is the master tag. and I think for me VR is better (or Virtual-Reality). You can find out how many posts are under certain tags. YOu might think TECHNOLOGY is a better starter tag.

Did your mates do it too, and are they on steemit? If so tag them using @theirname

And I'd probably have had a video of me being all energised and blown away at the end. That would have been cool.