Tranquil twilight
the birds have returned to their nest
the sound of the ripple starts slowly
the wind held the breath in the ridge
the shadow lovingly feeds the silence
for a moment...
calm controlled the situation
to allow vision to escape into the evening sky
without any sound interruption
so that the soul can return to itself
in a tranquil twilight
I love how you tie the title in at the end. One line that possibly confused me was "calmly controlled the situation." Do you mean;
"Calm... controlled the situation," ???
Curious on your thoughts about that line.
I think you may enjoy my recent poem=)
https://steemit.com/poetry/@sixshot/last-desserts
You're right .. it's just a mistake .. I'll edit it now. Thank you very much.