This is a great poem... words were well chosen and it certainly captivates the imagination. I have written a few poems in the past. Makes wonder whether I should try my mind at poetry again. I want to thank you for posting yourself as a follower of my blog @pjbnikao. I just posted my second blog after 17 days. Let me know what you think. With each passing day, I am becoming increasingly impressed with the quality of work here at Steemit. How does one compete but just by giving our best and observing how the universe responds. Have a great day!!! Phil Brenman
Thanks so much! You should give poetry a try once more! :)