AN HONORABLE MAN!!!
As the rains' fall
I'll catch every tear
From your weeping fountain;
Rewrite the sorrow...chanced on,
To convey the willingness of a smile,
With laughter...vacant of solemnity, echoing
Of the soulful vocals of your heart:
For none, would be more sated than I...
To see you, a rainbow...the delight of my eye
I really liked this. There are very few poems to which I can say "I wish I wrote that", but this is one of them. If I had written it, I would be proud, and so should you. Great write.
Thank u so much... 😊 honored.
If i could only bare, the sight of you leaving,
cause i could only hear the sound of your weeping,
i would wipe out those tears, shake my rigid feeling,
👏👏