You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: Home alone. 5 minute free write prompt.View the full contextbuzzbayer (32)in #poetry • 8 years ago Nice one. In just 5 minutes!?! Impossible for me... #ThumbsUp
The meter and rhythm is all wrong. It is a good for the perfectionist side to just leave it and post. Almost rhyming ideas with a messy construction.
Good explanation :) Maybe i will try it sometime...