fitting this to an asymmetric newspaper column alongside pictures of post-mod art?

would love to leave a longer comment, but about to take a much needed long walk, my friend, so only a few notes.

Some of the line breaks strike abruptly, the counter balance of having such a visually engaging aesthetic. Most notable in that last stanza, a few broken thoughts where clarity might suit the message more - even noting that the message is coming through a crippled circuit board.

My interpretation after two reads, just so you can see how a reader's eyes approaches (I know the value these can sometimes hold), the overabundance of both "expert voices" and noise in every medium of today, the blurred bar between experts & hobbyists and the platform that has given voice and credence to targeted campaigns gripping the hearts of many in a renewed snake-oil culture. maybe a minor commentary on the fear of missing out.

and some lines are just masterpieces in themselves; looking at you:

Drowned out by the profound silence
Of the cosmos screaming about reality