That's intense! I like the passion of course and the attention to sounds, the way the words seem to breathe at the same time you do. Keep it on :)
That's intense! I like the passion of course and the attention to sounds, the way the words seem to breathe at the same time you do. Keep it on :)
Thank you! I wanted to establish a racing pace to invoke the rushed, breathlessness associated with a passionate relationship.
Yes, exactly what I felt, the poem comes and go in strong waves :)