TERALI
Selamat sore menjelang berbuka sahabat steemian. Semoga masih tetap kuat berpuasa hari ini. Kali ini saya ingin berbagi tulisan dalam bentuk puisi. Sangat ringkas tetapi mewakili kejadian beberapa hari ini.
TERALI
Benar, aku juga pemenang
Terbang bebas di bawah ilusi
Menapak jejak pendahulu
Menirukan gestur pengalih ketidaktahuan
Benar, aku pun membiru
Menentang jiwa di ujung layar
Terdesak di area lapang
Terkenang riwayat di mata pendatang
Benar, aku lah saksi
Kegusaran yang tidak tersalurkan
Membendung semakin tinggi
Memendam kata dari sanubari, maaf
Benar, aku lah terali
Jeruji bening tanpa kunci dan penyekat
Melanglang lepas dalam kotak prosedur
Menegakkan ego, mendiamkan simpati
Calang, 22 May 2018
Created by @daentepi
Benar, aku juga pemenang
Terbang bebas di bawah ilusi
Menapak jejak pendahulu
Menirukan gestur pengalih ketidaktahuan
Benar, aku pun membiru
Menentang jiwa di ujung layar
Terdesak di area lapang
Terkenang riwayat di mata pendatang
Benar, aku lah saksi
Kegusaran yang tidak tersalurkan
Membendung semakin tinggi
Memendam kata dari sanubari, maaf
Benar, aku lah terali
Jeruji bening tanpa kunci dan penyekat
Melanglang lepas dalam kotak prosedur
Menegakkan ego, mendiamkan simpati
Calang, 22 May 2018
Created by @daentepi
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Saya bukan ahli puisi.. Namun dari kata yang mengalir menyibakkan arti yang sangat mendalam. Akhir kata saya cuma bisa berkata
Selamat berbuka puasa.
😂😂😂
Hahaha guru lon, Pak @khaimi. Memahami puisi tidak harus menjadi ahli. Tinggal baca 😉
Selamat teraweh pak 😉
Benar, saya bukanlah ahli kata puisi berjuta makna
Meniru apa yang dikatakan saudara @khaimi, khak ....khak ...khak arti mendalam.
Benar juga, aku melihatmu seperti terali
Jeruji yang berdiri tegak dan meagungkan prosedur.
Mengabaikan simpati dan mengutamakan empati
Seraya memohon maaf bila hubungan (pelayanan) meleset dari kata cinta
Yang tetap meneguhkan prinsip kebenaran.
Benar, kamu harus tetap bergerak dan menepi dititik berjuta kebahagiaan dan senyuman
Mencoba memberikan feedback dengan kata puisi yang gagal nalar, he he he
Sukses terus @daentepi
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STOPKemana aja bang. Jadi rindu.
Sudah lama tidak buka steemit, Bang @djamidjalal. Selamat berpuasa ya 😉😁
Itulah. Kami rindu ni. Haa
Selamat berpuasa juga untuk abang.
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