RUNAWAY

in #poetry8 years ago

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I don't want to get high on your love anymore

you keep drowning me in your water

you get my mind switching from time to time

with all that you do

turning me on

so rude of you

you feel the blood running through my body

confiding my heart with you is tearing me down

All my walls comes crashing down when you're around

you're messing with my mind

you don't like small talk

got me numb to the pain and pleasure

I can't feel my face when you're with me

fell in love with the substance of bliss

you know that I want you

but you know you are not good for me

i see all the scars on my body

i don't have to be reminded

you will be the death of me

the pain don't matter no more

i close my eyes

i breath the dry air

trying to resist you

nothing makes feel fine

that is why i want you all the time

planting brain mines

with no map

oh my dopamines are in trouble

under heavy pressure like in war front

yes this is war

if I lose

you win

if I win

I lose you

you don't need my love

All you want is to give me all the pleasure

however

you and me can blend

I want you on repeat

I want you bad

but my heart wants to runaway

before I lose myself

before I lose my soul

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Beautiful piece, full of irony.

if I win

I lose you

I love that

thanks fam, seems you have a thing with words.

cheers

Well written piece. Found you on The unmentionables. upvoted.

thank you so much. Wow! I am overwhelmed

I like this : I don't want to get high on your love anymore
you keep drowning me in your water
you get my mind switching from time to time
with all that you do
turning me on
so rude of you

hehehe, glad you found something you like

not bad for an intro right

Wow. This is quite profound. It could have gone a couple different ways... Well done :)

thank you, I thought about going a different route but decided to stick to this

Oh! Mr.Shakespeare ...what more can i say? Ur poem is great. I wish i could write like you

you can fam, just give it a shot

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