The Illusion Of Love
We are gambling with round numbers, happiness is the replacement of human pain. We hide from the truth that comes in the rivers of change, we see the power sources above our ability to understand. The energy of a star descends on the palms of your victory, change me.
We pass by the joy in colorful glasses, we turn ships toward deserts of thought. I'm not smart enough to understand your blessings, the maximum reward comes in the form of hidden messages. Friends change positions according to the dynamics of money, we are lost.
We grow along the trees of knowledge, the fruits mix a powerful illusion in the veins of life. The shores change the rain for words of freedom, our spirit has become a wind that runs through foggy conclusions. We play in the rhythm of better days, the sun kisses the moon on romantic nights.
I feel your lips as a fire in the snow, the touch changes the consciousness of the beginning. In the depths, I find the power of new love, the rain passes through the embrace of your dreams. You are the lighthouse of my soul, show me the right path.
Original poetry written by @dobartim
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To understand the good in life We have to see. To see We have to bleed. To bleed We have to be hurt. In addition, We receive knowledge. This poetry very well describes how You truly see and understand the inner and the most important nature of human being. And, of course, being patient to understand all the messages will lead to great victories of ourselves !
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The joy of Mother Nature soothes my pains
The knowledge I acquired makes me thrives
I learnt to be flexible and embrace change
And development is steady in my empire
I was born and raised by the trees of knowledge
Bathed in the river of wisdom
Ate the fruits 🍎 planted by understanding
And so my comprehension is not of this world
So many were born like me
I have so many birthday mates
Yet all of them are lost, lost in their thoughts
Because they seek nothing but the wisdom they already had , confusion everywhere but I’m triumphant cause I discovered myself long before now
You are born poet
Very nice post @dobartim
I like this your post.
Thank you very much
I read all this poem i think best of the best walk is Allah almagthy. Allah is true walk of love and the other. @dobartim my opinion on your poem is finish. Thank about your share, @mghufroncholid31
Thank you very much for your nice words
Thank you too i am poets from madura indonesia
This is awesome
"Happiness is the replacement of human pain"
"Friends change positions according to the dynamics of money"
Powerful and true.
Thank you very much for your kind words
This very interesting. I have to read the second paragraph twice because of it sweet words over there. I think I should call you "Doctor of Love"
Thank you very much, I am only servant
You are welcome boss
Very interesting friends
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Ok thank
always good my dear friend.. ...
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Great,,, i love this,,,
I am so excited to try to make a poem ,,,
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i appreciate it, if i have time ,,, i will go.
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Very inspiring words, your words in the poetry change the way of thinking. I love it.
Thanks for sharing such beautiful poetry.
We win only Together
See you on the top, I don't see secret words in this comment
I don't remember the word was it spirituality and love?