Storming the Castle - Fantasy writing

in #poetry5 years ago

we stormed the castle.

[Fantasy] [Dungeon]

A knight entered the room, and in a rage ordered his sword to cut into his thigh.

[Bard] [King]

The leader of the troop, who entered, came to a halt.

[Bard] [King]

"This is a matter that I am unable to speak about openly, but,

As you can see, our nation is weak with our forces. In the north, there is a country named Asher, and on the south there is a country called Ophir. They have been fighting alongside each other since the time of Manulgir."

[King] [Bard] [Leader]

"Are those brothers of yours on the other side of the walls?"

[Bard] [King]

"I do not know either, but from what I have heard of them as soldiers you must know that one of them is currently a hero called Asher. If he cannot stand on his own legs, then I cannot give him the same treatment I gave him back at the gate.

Therefore, it seems as though one of the armies must fall before the other.

This is our mission, is it not? Let us prepare, and then,

Let's return

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Nice piece of writing, but you may want to connect the first line a little more to the action though, as it's disturbing not to know why he does that.