Broken Beautifully (An Original Poem)

in #poetry6 years ago (edited)

All of us,
each and every one,
are broken,

but some,
they are
broken beautifully,

the light refracts
from their shards,
exacting sharp shadows,

a perfect contrast
to the ugliness
of this world.

Could it be the things
they give to us
are even more valuable
than what they
wish to steal away?

Ponder this, as
you stare into a sky
you’ve never seen before

let what you feel
reverberate within you
for the rest of your life
and change you...
now and forever.

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the light refracts from their shards, exacting sharp shadows,

What a line it is...I liked it the most form the above lyrics...

Thank you so much @ericvancewalton

This poem was so much enjoyable! Wonderful poem..

Great job bro on your poetry thanks for sharing t. you have my upvote & resteem @mannyfig1956

Love it, and every word is so true, love to read it...

I love the idea, @ericvancewalton, of being 'broken beautifully'. Thank you, for developing it and reminding us of the power of having our hearts broken, open, with tenderness and compassion.

So many echoes of this life-sustaining idea from different disciplines --- spirituality, psychology, and literature. Here' a few:

"I was given a thorn in my flesh... to torment me. / Three times I pleaded with the Lord to take it away from me. / But he said to me, “My grace is sufficient for you, for my power is made perfect in weakness. ”

  • St. Paul

'The wound is the place where the Light enters you.' -Rumi

'Only the wounded physician heals.' -Jung

'There is a crack in everything / that's how the light gets in.'

  • Leonard Cohen

Even yours truly has written a little ditty on this subject:

"I've been lavishly gifted a pain
as thick and rich as oil paint
By pushing it round the page
I've learned to make Art."

The power of words and how they dance from one's pen. An upvote and a follow from me.

what a talent you are, its comming from very deep within you, thats for sure!

The last two stanza; highpoint for me
Awesome piece of art

Nice one :)
Liked the poem ,and yes all of us are somehow affected to be broken somehow !

This was a deep poem. I also think the image of the glass breaking went perfect with the poem. Nice job

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