Haiku for the new age, mandala

in #poetry8 years ago


Raisin mandala 

kitchen counter, just playing

snowflakes and new hope


Contemporary version:


Mandala appears

just playing

new year, new hope


If you want to know more about haiku please read this post on my blog: 

https://steemit.com/poetry/@lakshmi/what-is-a-haiku-haiku-challenge

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Thank you for your input, i used the #steemit tag because i found it relevant.
My haiku ends with : new year, new hope. that is how I see steemit. I am feed up with status quo, I want more. What about you, is that why you are using steemit?

Kind of curious; what tag is irrelevant?