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RE: “Stupid little girl brain” (Day 67 of 100 -- Poetry challenge)
Biting words, acerbic and very witty! Maybe this is only subtly implied, or not at all, but I liked the callback to 'distaste for women' from 'little pointy tongue'. The whole thing is written almost sweetly, in an unassuming tone, to the point that you might not grasp the subtext if you weren't paying attention. That too, I think, is so telling in regards to the subject of the poem. Very nicely done.
"The whole thing is written almost sweetly, in an unassuming tone, to the point that you might not grasp the subtext if you weren't paying attention."
You are so asute. ;)
Thank you, it is always a pleasure to see you take.