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RE: LONE SURVIVOR

in #poetry8 years ago

Very powerful use of repetition. This is such a tough subject to approach but you do it with care and a full range of emotions.

These lines I think could apply to any of us:

My destination, I know not where
The make of my quest, I know not yet
But I swear I'm moving out:

Thanks for sharing it with us :)

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You are welcome, and thank you for our sincere comment @lazarus-wist