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in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

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I can feel your breath
running through my veins,
that impeccable dust of life,
that infinite, which sustains

I want to explore your dimensions
hurry up, take me now
since you know my intentions

In the meantime
I contemplate what's not far
two galaxies
waiting to become one!

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I liked the way this used the personified POV to describe an actual technical happening of the merging of two galaxies. At least that's the way I interpreted it.

Poetry is always a mirror - so it feels more like a love poem - and a nice one - look up my (few) poems if you have time - keep on writing

Great piece here. I enjoyed reading :)

Good poetry brother.... nice post. Thanks for sharing.

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