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RE: The lady I call my own

in #poetry7 years ago

’It felt like the first time, yet again.’ What a powerful line. The feeling of falling in love for the first time, again, is a very significant one. Another line that stood out to me was: ’In her company time became my enemy.’ Time is such a fragile thing, and there is simply never enough of it. If we let it slip away, it will haunt us forever. When accompanied by someone we love, time tends to vanish, be virtually non-existant, until, of course, we find out we are out of time. I really loved this poem. Thank you for sharing!

If you are interested and have some spare time, I have some poetry on my blog too.

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Thank you so much for your kind words.

You are welcome!