girls night

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

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Like butts you marching in addition to rail you scavenging is proud to you narcissistic for the life you sell tickets masihkah you girl? -

night you look stunning day you lying stiff languished lamenting the fate, one of whom you like a doll the he-
taste for a sheet of Red caressed full resigned -

waiting who came hope there customers in the night light -

up to dawn chapped you still greedy finally dubbed the crap by those who do not claim wrong -

girl, your age looks young back before cry your dreams still high -

you live in the land is wrong do not add a problem, go home -

Dare was struggling to stars fixed bright because we are fighting and you no longer a girl masked -

Oh girls, girls night poor

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Really insightful!
BTW, I wouldn't mind you taking a look and help critic some of my poems

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