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RE: Unexpected Alternative -- Peter Marie's Poetry Blitz #4

in #poetry8 years ago

Well penned, @petermarie!

I couldn't help thinking about Robert Frost's "The Road Not Taken."

Loved the rhythm, specially in these lines:

I can’t turn back
I don’t want to!
The thought I just can’t bear;
To leave my love
Newfound, no doubt,
But now to me quite dear.

A song! ♥

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Thank you very much, Marlyn!
I have found most persons love this poem more than others of mine... Perhaps it resonates with something deep in everyone's heart.
Thanks for reading. I'm so glad you enjoyed it! 😄

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