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RE: A quick little love poem....(Original work by @dagger212)
I really liked this. Everything is a gimmick. To write poetry is to say something in a way that has never been said before. I think you accomplish that with this poem. It's really good and the rhythm is so perfect that it almost hides the genius of the lines. Good write.
Thank you. You are too kind. I do really work on the rhythm. It's seems essential to me in creating the right picture.