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RE: Submission

in #poetry8 years ago

beautiful poetry, sent a feeling of love right through me, however maybe but i feel that it portrays much more emotions than love, it can be success, it can be lost, ecstasy and loneliness. good rhythm and words.

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Very good. U caught on to the emotions I conveyed =] its a lust orginating from love. Love always first!:]