You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: THE SONG IN MY HEADView the full contextView the direct parentmritsnobigdeal (60)in #poetry • 8 years ago If only she will give me the chance. I really want to sing for her.
I love those lines:
"Oh! Don't keep me waiting for too much, I can't sleep, I can't concentrate, I can't even feel myself anymore.
Am breathless and I want to breathe freely. The first time I saw you, I saw that song, yes I can feel it."
Very Romantic poem you wrote.
Oh thanks so much.
If you don't try you wont know