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RE: ADSactly Poetry : Lucid Lyrics Designed to Expand Minds (Part 24)
What kind of text is this? It doesn't have the style of a poem or a song, it looks like a story or an essay. The story of the first love, of sexual initiation, sometimes is not the best. When we are young we usually let ourselves be dazzled by the brightness, the beauty, and we let ourselves be manipulated or dragged by friends, circumstances. I believe that in order for the human being to mature, to acquire experiences, it is necessary that he lives, that he stumbles, that he looks for and obtains the weapons to be able to defend himself. I believe that many of us have fallen in love and have broken our hearts, however, every day we are betting on living that feeling. Greetings, @zentalk
Actually it is a song... But I could imagine its hard to visualize without hearing how the words are supposed to rhyme. There are good parts and bad parts to every childhood. I think lots of people have regrets about how they lost their virginity and the motives for losing it when they did may primarily come down to pressure. People need to make mistakes, its a part of our growth process. Learning from mistakes, making better choices, that is the definition of success. Most people can relate to a broken heart as well. So if I stirred any emotion in you, I've done my job well! Thanks!