The Rules of Life
The Rules of Life
My mind is filled with gray clouds
My smile has faded
The sadness always follow wherever I go
Bringing the pain
I fall into the valley of darkness
Drowning in the ocean
Lost in the middle of a city
Remembering this is very hard
Sometimes
I should give up
Sometimes
I should survive to continue my life
Life is full of rules
The universe say, "You must"
The stars blink, it's sign of "You can"
But when the sky turns grey, I am getting blue
I have to be like that
And I have to be like this
I can't do like that
And I can't do it like this
It hurt too much
When you can't do anything freely
And it's joyful too much
When you are wild
The darkness has changed
Gloom is coming
I am weak
And exhausted
I ask to the moon
"Is it too hard to live?"
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upvoted..nice poem..i love it.kindly see my poem also..hope you will love it..
its about faith and love of cats..
https://steemit.com/poetry/@mrblu/the-bluepost-walk-by-faith-poetry-walk-by-faith-and-work-in-faith-through-jesus-christ
https://steemit.com/poetry/@mrblu/cats-love-me-much-poem
Thanks :)
Going through pain... Thank you for being a healing aid :)
You're welcome :)
Very nice! You got my upvote :)
Thank you so much friend :)
I Like these words
Don't think about the past mistakes too much. Let it flow and let your past mistakes be your best lessons. 'Cause people deserve a chance at a brighter future
Yeah that's my bio, thank you so much :)
very sad but certainty does not lose its beauty!!!..
You have such a sweet means of expressing your emotion...
your wording is so gentle yet I can tell they are heartfelt...
I love!!!! :]
Thank you so much. I'll do my best to make others next post better ❤
Beautiful poem! @poetry-vibes
Thanks ❤
Can kind of relate to this poem , the feeling of being entrapped in people expectations , chaining u to watch ur every move , being wild and free is the way . I'm sure then life's thorns will one day sprout roses.
Thank you for commenting :)
Nice, but why so much pain. Life is not that tough dear, only if you are living it the wrong way. I hope my write ups can help you somehow. I write poetries on deep concepts to help people. Check out my page and see if any title can help you somehow. Hope to read something happy and blissful from you. All the best, following you now :)
Thank you :)
Actually, all humans have so many pains in their life. But, they can handle it, so other can't see the truth and the only other knows is everything is all right :)
That's true. But even if you show it to others, its no use. As everyone is trapped in their own pain, they don't have time and effort to deal with other's pain as well. So its better to understand that life is about ups and down and keep your calm no matter situations are good or bad.
Thank you, nice replied :)
But, just understand is not enough at all. Everything is nothing without acting. Yes I know, everyone have their own pains and the only one knows is God. So, with understand about life we have to act as well as possible to be the better human :)