UNENDING LOVE

in #poetry7 years ago

As beautiful as the sunrise that marks a new day,
Life and laughter felt within each bright ray.

As calm as the breaths of sweet nothings in the wind,
whispers shared that no soul would ever wish to rescind.

As silent as the hushed, still waters of the sea,
Quieter than even the muted buzzing of a bee.

As peaceful as the tranquil flickering of a flame,
That glows softly as we play our innocent game.

As burning as the extreme power of The Sun,
Causing just as much pain as it can bring fun.

As forceful as the violent winds during a storm,
That wipe away any memories of times once found warm.

As intense as the violent waves crashing in the ocean,
That spur the reveal of unspoken words into motion.

As desperate as the tempestuous flames of a fire,
That burn to ash the words spoken by a liar.

So describes the juxtaposition of my love for you,
My beauty, my valentine.

I share my deepest feelings as lovers should do,
For a love that is so fine.

No greater words ever spoken than those of I love you.
No words ever spoken that were so true.

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Wow...this is a spectacular poem. Amazing similes...your use of similes and rhymes made it worth a re-read

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