RE: Poetry Dice Challenge #3: The Rainbow Bee (Entry 2)

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verbal-d (71)in #poetry • 9 years ago

Nice and sweet poem. I enjoyed it. Thanks for entering. Poor little regular bees get a bad rep because of the African killer bees. Upvoted.

By the way there's a typo, "They either run way" should be "away*" if I'm not mistaken. Hope that helps.

9 years ago in #poetry by verbal-d (71)

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hopehuggs (67) 9 years ago

Thanks for your lovely comment and I fixed that typo.

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verbal-d (71) 9 years ago

You're very welcome

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