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RE: Finish the Fiction Story Contest - Week #19

in #poetsunited6 years ago

I really enjoyed the accompanying music @cyemela it fitted somehow with the story ending you wrote. At first the music complimented the confusion that the character was feeling

He couldn’t remember moving here. He had always just lived in this place. Like waking up with a hangover after a big party the night before that had changed his life or something.

and toward the end it really fitted with the over all scene and noir style of the descriptive writing. Nice entry :-)

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Thanks! Try to do that with every blog. Some work better than others.

Thanks! Try to do that
With every blog. Some work
Better than others.

                 - cyemela


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