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RE: My Last Date With an American
Hey Man! Enjoyed reading the story; here's a tip: When going from paragraph to paragraph could you press enter one time because it seems all of it is crammed together! All in all, great job with the blog!
Thanks for the hint, I was thinking it looked all crammed together and I didn't like the way it looked, I'll do that next blog for sure!