Hi @alf4t1h. I realised some of your sentences are copied straight from the original article, and you only change a few words in it. Online Plagiarism Checker gave this article less than 40% of uniqueness which indicates it is not a good piece of article. You might want to consider a few suggestions to improve:

• Write anything from the references based on your understanding and by using your own words.
• If you need to copy the entire sentence, make it a quoted text by using the symbol ">". If you're unfamiliar with Markdown Editing, you can click here to learn more.
• Aim at least 75 to 80% uniqueness of text. You can use any of the plagiarism checkers online.

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