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RE: Finish The Story Contest: It Happened at Dawn
This is wonderfully written! The many details and the tone as the general goes over the data feel very believable. Chilling!
This is wonderfully written! The many details and the tone as the general goes over the data feel very believable. Chilling!
I appreciate that. I actually looked up some stuff to make sure I didn't fudge on details. (Ex: checked half lives of different medicines to make the gas disappeared quickly). Once I got the idea of an experiment, it was just a matter of trimming to make the piece "clean". Thanks for reading!