Sketching WFH #3 : Home sweet home (1)

Basically, the image below was originally sketch by kimkanone ( feel free to check his ig or youtube account to get better insight on how to sketch). I tried to follow the way his sketch. I am expecting to get better idea on how to sketch, but it doesn't seem so, at least not for now. I still need lots of help

In the original image, there were 2 old ladies (probably) were walking somewhere on the image while carrying bag of groceries. But I failed to sketch them

Wish me luck on another sketch.

Cheers,