STACH-SHORT-STORY CONTEST17 199WORDS

in #stach7 years ago (edited)

MY TWISTED FANTASY

Esther loved working here; a beautiful salon where elites came to make their hair and nails but these girls made her hate her work. She looked at them bragging of how men couldn't resist their charm, and about their fathers wealth, so full of themselves!

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"If wishes were horses, beggars would play polo" she thought. She had nursed a fantasy for months; her father was wealthy, she'd all she wanted; good clothes, nice houses and cars, trips to exotic locations around the world and most importantly; the money and power to give those fools a lesson. She wished their fathers would either die or get sacked from their jobs. They would be working for her: making her hair and nails.
She would scream at them anyhow she dimed fix;
"Hey you, bring my phone" or
"Can't you see the shampoo is too much?"
She saw them running around in her mind. She could make them lie down while she walked on them if she wanted.

She was jolted back to reality when her boss called out at her...

"Esther put off the hair dryer ".

Yes madam!
she said as a cruel smile found its way to her face.

Words Count: 199

Hello dearies I participated in the stach199 shortstory contest,and that above is my entry. You can upvote it through this link:
https://steemit.com/stach/@stach/stach-short-story-contest-17-199-words-10sbd-prize-pool#@annieben/re-stach-stach-short-story-contest-17-199-words-10sbd-prize-pool-20180115t125947444z

You could also partake in the contest ,it would really nice.
Big thank you to stach and @ejemai for the opportunity,very grateful

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Beautiful story, but I don't like all of Esther's wishes, it shows she'll never be contented,if she eventually gets more. Her lusts are overwhelming.
Well done @annieben

Thank you deary.... "twisted" fantasy.

Hello annieben
One word.... You content is a defintion of creativity and i applaud this. Esther's wishes were quite weird you know.
Nicely written my dear. I love this

@peterwrites This means alot coming from you, the fantasy was supposed to be twisted thats why it seems wierd. Thanks alot sir

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Welldone