"SC-S32/W1-"Today's Writing, Tomorrow's Memories."—The Personal Diary

Hello everyone!

It's Eid second day a lot of excitement and fun for the kids and family as it's special occasions for the Muslims especially for the kids.

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I wake up early in the morning because Eid is celebrating it's not for sleeping. After breakfast we received call from sister-in-law she invited for lunch and dinner.

Yeah it's excitement for all of us because we wanted to enjoy each and every moment we ready and reached there as it's Friday and jumma prayer is also offering.

At home entrance there is beautiful aquarium it was mind blowing I stuck to take photos as the memory of tomorrow. We just loved it.

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The beauty of swinging near the aquarium making the atmosphere very cool my cousin received us with warm welcome and offered juice.

Kids jumped to play with toys all together were playing and enjoying and I was free from them as these are moments of love and care.

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We offered prayer and sit for Holy Quran, we enjoyed macaroni in lunch along with juice and cold drinks this is one of the favourite dish for kids.

The lunch was light and yummy we sit for gossiping because on these occasions all family loved to sit and shared fun.

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My little flowers were shining and moving here and there this is the real beauty of life and parents loved to see their kids happy.

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Finally it's time for very special dinner many dishes were cooked filled with taste, everyone liked the taste and aroma of the food.

The yummy biryani, kabab, meat dishes and also sweet just double the Eid celebration. We enjoyed dinner together.

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In the last qehwa was served and we say goodbye to all, because it's time to leave after a very amazing day, we altogether enjoyed second day of Eid.

Kind regards

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Hi @drhira, thank you for participating in the "Week-01: "Today's Writing, Tomorrow's Memories."—Personal Diary."

I can see you and kids had a day well spent with your sister inlaw visiting them to spent Eid celebration for the second day together.I can see your kids were so happy and enjoyed every moment at your sister inlaw place .Automatically when are children are we are happy as well.

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Greetings dear friend. You look so cute together with your family. I really admire that.