#ZapFic contest: tell me a tale in 240 characters or less (results of last week, and new prompt)

felt.buzz (71)in #steembasicincome • 6 years ago (edited)

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6 years ago in #steembasicincome by felt.buzz (71)

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mariannewest (71) 6 years ago

Did it!!!

There couldn’t have been a starker contrast between the two. Not on the outside. Oh no. They were twins. But one’s heart was shining bright, the other had blood on his hands.

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agmoore (64) 6 years ago

Oh, wow. Showing us how to do it :))
I would read that book in a flash--East of Eden, Cain and Abel....classic plot foundation.

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mariannewest (71) 6 years ago

I know, right. The age-old story of the good and the bad brother 😂 Or....... are they sisters? Well, I should have said their instead of his and it would have been better...

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felt.buzz (71) 6 years ago

That would have been interesting!

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mariannewest (71) 6 years ago

I know, right. Too late to change it?

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felt.buzz (71) 6 years ago

You can do as you like! I always reread and judge just before payout

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mariannewest (71) 6 years ago (edited)

Thanks. I think I will update - just makes it more interesting 🤪

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mariannewest (71) 6 years ago

actually, changed my mind. It feels a little like cheating. It will have to do as is...

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agmoore (64) 6 years ago

Gotta admire that...it's about the fun and the challenge, isn't it?

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felt.buzz (71) 6 years ago

Thanks for your entry!

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joeylim (61) 6 years ago

@felt.buzz

Here's my entry! https://steemit.com/zapfic/@joeylim/the-great-divide-or-microfiction-8013c6fee5a6b

Thanks so much for organizing 🌻🌻

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felt.buzz (71) 6 years ago

Thanks for your entry!

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agmoore (64) 6 years ago

I got distracted but never forgot my 240 character story :)
Here it is:

She was going to ride to the end of the day, or until she ran out of money. Never wanted that damn ring, never asked for it. Now she was free. Couldn't blame him, or anybody, anymore. Step on the gas and find the future.

Thanks, @felt.buzz. Fun to meet the challenge!

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felt.buzz (71) 6 years ago

Thanks for your entry! :)

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simonpennon (56) 6 years ago

"Jinx!"

"It couldn't be more obvious - look at their hair! One parts to the right, and one parts to the left. One's right handed and one's obviously left handed. Twins, sure, but you can tell who is who."

"Ma'am, it's just a mirrored image."

Hopefully not posted too late!

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