Hi, @qasim-ummati

It's a pleasure to see that you've accepted my challenge, welcome! Here is your evaluation:

I agree with you that the first thanks we should give is for being who we are, all the experiences we have lived have led us to be who we are now, regardless of whether they have been good or bad.

As a note of the publication, I am going to suggest you to change your translator. It has many errors in English.